- What kind of mood/message are you attempting to communicate? I want to communicate the mood of beauty in destruction. The pictures have been ripped and burned but still seem to have a beauty to them.
- What other elements do you plan to add to your piece or in what ways are you planning
to refine it? I have one more piece to put with it which is the last part of the poem to complete it
- What size will you print your piece and why? I am thinking just printing it about 16x5 to keep it smaller and more intimate and I would present them vertically .
- Do you have alternative plans for finished presentation? Not really, I would like to mat and frame them though.
- What kind of feedback are you looking for from your classmates? What size do you guys think i should print it?
I really like how you have made this look like something that pieced back together.This is a beautiful picture, especially knowing the little bit of history behind it you told me about in class the other day.
ReplyDeleteI like the 16x5 format, and even if you wanted to go bigger, I think it would look great.
I feel like this would make a really nice framed piece that you can display in your house on the wall.
Good Work!
I like this idea! It's very unique! And I definitely see the beauty in destruction! These images are awesome! As for printing, I'd recommend larger. It will really enhance the color and define both the beauty and destruction of the image.
ReplyDeleteI think this looks really good. The burnt edges gives look great. The negitive space between the peices is also really nice. I think printing at 16X5 would be a good size.
ReplyDeleteThis is really great! I like the destructive but organized aspect of the piece. I wonder if you might make this a two part series and have the proceeding piece be disorganized like when you open up a puzzle box, but as you build upon it you can see more clearly what the message is. Just a thought. Other than that, the work looks very well done.
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